MONEY
Money is the most important thing for most people in the world. If they don’t have money they feel sad, but if they have enough money they still want more and more. Money is important for everybody; it is a part of happiness, but not all the happiness. In my essay, I’m going to write about my opinion in the relationship between money and the happiness.
Money is the most important thing for most people in the world. If they don’t have money they feel sad, but if they have enough money they still want more and more. Money is important for everybody; it is a part of happiness, but not all the happiness. In my essay, I’m going to write about my opinion in the relationship between money and the happiness.
Firstly, if we have enough money to eat, dress, study and play, we will feel happy, because we have everything that makes us happy, actually, everything in the world needs money.
On the other hand, money without family and friends doesn’t mean anything for us, because we can’t enjoy our time only spending money in shopping without having a nice time with our friends and family.
Finally, money is an important element in the life. We can say money brings happiness, but we can’t say happiness can brings money. I believe that we should have both money and relationships to be happy, and we can’t be happy with only one of them.
DONE BY:
ISRA ABDULLA ALMARZOUQI
So, in conclusion, money good? Thanks for your thoughts. I counted only one mistake--and that's a comma splice in paragraph 2. Other than that, this is brilliantly written! 10/10
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