Nowadays earning money is the goal of every human in this world, but why all people think about this? They care about money because they think that they can do anything they want . If they have it ,they think that without money there is no happy life ,everybody want to live in welfare ,but this care sometimes changes into illness and they forget the main reason of having money.
In my essay I’m going to handle this problem and talk about the Negative side of this problem and the best Solution for solving it in a logical way .
First of all, people think that with their money they can be friends with whoever they want but they don't know that this is a fake relationship and ever boady wants to have their money ,and the money goes they go too.
Second, the money comes and goes and the most important thing in the world is health and safe life. A lot of people are getting robbed every day and their life is uncomfortable because they are always afraid about their money and they can't sleep because of that .
Third, People think that money is the key to success, but this is a wrong way of thinking because it spread hatred and greed , while the science and good morals are the foundation of every successful human being in this community .
In my essay I’m going to handle this problem and talk about the Negative side of this problem and the best Solution for solving it in a logical way .
First of all, people think that with their money they can be friends with whoever they want but they don't know that this is a fake relationship and ever boady wants to have their money ,and the money goes they go too.
Second, the money comes and goes and the most important thing in the world is health and safe life. A lot of people are getting robbed every day and their life is uncomfortable because they are always afraid about their money and they can't sleep because of that .
Third, People think that money is the key to success, but this is a wrong way of thinking because it spread hatred and greed , while the science and good morals are the foundation of every successful human being in this community .
Finally, in conclusion in my point of view, I strongly believe that we earn money to live not living for money, because they must think about other reasons that make them happy, like: a good health and children and they must thank their god for that to live comfortably .
Great writing! 10/10. A couple spelling mistakes, capitalization mistakes, and verb mistakes. Otherwise, very clean, strong writing.
ReplyDeleteya right..
ReplyDeletemoney never ever can buy happiness =]