The Happiness shoes
when I was young girl I used to go with my mom to the supermarket to bay grocery. One day I saw shoes section by mistake ,at that moment it was a love from first sight !.
Different things could make people happy. For example new hair style or new car. For me staying with old shoes make me feel something missing and I need to complete it by baying new shoes . Baying shoes cure my sad feeling. Most people think it’s good thing to do what make you happy while crises . But the bad side is not controlling the habit . For example : I liked the supermarket shoes at first but I bought them from more expensive shop ,then I started to bay from the Mall ,after that I can’t bay them unless from a specific expensive shops !. So I think everyone must do what they like to get off the pressure and relax but control it.
when I was young girl I used to go with my mom to the supermarket to bay grocery. One day I saw shoes section by mistake ,at that moment it was a love from first sight !.
Different things could make people happy. For example new hair style or new car. For me staying with old shoes make me feel something missing and I need to complete it by baying new shoes . Baying shoes cure my sad feeling. Most people think it’s good thing to do what make you happy while crises . But the bad side is not controlling the habit . For example : I liked the supermarket shoes at first but I bought them from more expensive shop ,then I started to bay from the Mall ,after that I can’t bay them unless from a specific expensive shops !. So I think everyone must do what they like to get off the pressure and relax but control it.
I have, like, two pairs of shoes and I'm bored with both of them! But from your writing, I can understand the "happiness shoes". Anyway, I score this one 8/10 for things like punctuation and spelling mistakes.
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