Since I got my driver's license I dreamed to get a great car. Which I mean that I want a Mini Cooper. I love this car because it is very Small and you can park it everywhere. But my parents have another opinion which is BMW X5. They bought it to me. I was Surprised, But now I love it.also I love the Technologies which is inside it. Now I cannot Substituted
Amena,
ReplyDeleteGreat car, although I love Minis too. Anyway, because the paragraph is kind of short, I'll score it a 7 out of 10. There are a few small mistakes: preposition, capital letters. Otherwise, the writing is just fine.